helooooooooooo.iam boshra .in the north the weather is hot. but, often in morning. is raning . in my grand father yardthe tree is very tall.goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooobuy. its , goooooooooooooooooooooooooood .؟

DEAR STUDENTS,
SUMMER IS A WONDERFUL SEASON.WE ALL TRAVEL IN SUMMER. THE BEST FRUITS ARE AVAILABLE IN SUMMER.
I HAVE A GOOD SUGGESTION:
EVERY DAY WRITE THE TEMPERATURE.AFTER 3 MONTH DRAW A DIAGRAM. YOU WILL SEE THAT HOW THE WEATHER GRADUALLY WILL CHANGE.
Our life is like this diagram. will be high and down.
we need to understand these changes and we will enjoy the life.

Back to Writing Again...

Why do we write?

This isn’t something I’m going to tell you!

This is something I’m asking YOU! So if you want to know the answer you have to help me the first thing you can do is give a good answer to this question… why do YOU write?

Then we can talk about it more...

hello. my name is zoha. name of frend its


mahya

محيا جان ويا شمايي كه پاي اينترنت هايتان نشستيد
توجه كنيد.
يعني همان
binallod خودمان

Lets hear it for Boshra!

Dear Boshra, Hi! It's very kind of you to share your colorful experiences of your journey to the North with us.

What do yo like most about the North? I love the weather and rain and the sea and the forests and all the hand made stuff whether it's different foods or handicrafts!

Did you know that Mahdiar (or Sorena) had also had a trip to the North just recently as well? Did you read his reflections on Taftaan? What interests you most? How is his journey similar to yours?

And what about your journies here to other places like Taftaan and Karoon? How can you compare your journies in real life with your reading and writing journies?

Hope to hear from you soon!

my trip to north

hello. iam boshra .I went to north. i find the friend.and play with her.i swim in the see.and my grandfather get me a presant. it is a one bag.i like the bag.and i gave the mom.my mom is happy .and gave my dad the t. shirt .the t.shirt is blue.friday it!

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Its good.

Regarding "My 'I' and Our 'we'"

فکر کنم هفته ی پیش بود که خوندمش شایدم دو هفته قبل

Not sure really... I don’t remember exactly
But it seems as if I have been carrying its energy with me ever since
از همون موقع حالی به حولییم! ولی مثل این که قرار بوده امشب راجع بهش بنویسم
نمی دونم چندتا از شما تا حالا خوندینش ولی توصیه می کنم که حتما بخونینش می خوام ببینم شما چه جوری
می شین...
Really I’ve read quite a lot of things but I don’t remember the last time a text had the power to stir me up like this!
خیلی جالبه هر دفعه هم که می خونمش پر از هیجانم مثل اون اول های ابن السبیل که
He couldn’t control the wiggling smile on his lips while he was reading the things on our peaks
الان شاید یک کم می فهمم حسش چجوری بوده فقط مال من از یه
Wiggling smile
گذشته! هر لحظه می خواهم بپرم تو هوا
It’s like a ballad I just can’t let go if it once I start it and it’s so full of rhythm and sound and ups and downs and color and movement and beat and speed and ands and buts and hows and whats and whose and wheres and mines and yours and theirs and ours!
شاید عادت نداشتم همه مون را یه جا این جوری کنارهم ببینم

Ummmm… I dunno what this was an out pour of feelings? Maybe. Again I hope you share your version with us…

See ya! Ciao!

آهان آهان آهان داشت یادم می رفت... محض اطلاع اونایی که برای خودشون سانسور می کنن و تنبلی می کنن و یه چیزاییو نمی خونن و به محض این که من می گم برای فهمیدن یه متن باید کلش را خواند
Whether Frasi or English…
میگن ما که نمی فهمیم خواستم بگم ما همه مون (تا جایی که من دیدم و اطلاع دارم!) آدمیم. پس همه کار می تونیم بکنیم و همه چیزو می تونیم بفهمیم و هر کاری که فکرشو بکنین از دستمون بر می آد

فقط کافییه که اراده کنیم

اصلا دارم راجع به چی حرف می زنم!؟ مگه ای-میلتو چک نکردی!؟!؟

والسلام

2baby to gether fight . me and my friend.t o gether taking and go to them and siy

the baby plies sliad and to gether frfriend and to day happy.

happ2baby to gether fight.me and my frind to gether taking and go to themand say the baby plis slaid and to gether frind and to they y

HELLO
MY NAME IS ZOHA .
Z.O.H.A.
Z=ZOHA
O=ORANGE
H=HAZE
A=APELLE
GOODBIY
G.O.O.D.B.I.Y.

For Zoha...

Hmmm nice subject you have written about Zoha jaan...

Happiness... Happiness...

You know I think I am kaamelaan Happy, and do you know why?

Ye hadsi bezan ta bet begam chera...
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Khob because I have felt the hozoor and love of God in every element of nature and life... az ye doone barge sabze koochik gerefte, taa oon hame mohabbati ke tooye mamanam mibinaam ya shoma bachehaye gol ke boodane bahatoon mano por az hayajaano shaadi mikone! Everything, everything around me is so full of God's hozoor and power... think about it man yeki ke can't help but being HAPPY!

i am very good girl in the school .
are you good in school .
i dont like bad people .
i like good people .
my mother and
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my sister and
my brother
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iam 1 mother
1brother
1fother
1sister

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name

hello

my name is zoha is very good name than reyhaneh and bad childeren in the scoll.

evre baby has a one name

goodbiy

On the Death of Angie

Emrooz 7ome ke ino minevisaam, Angie died two days ago, on 5ome khordaad… I don’t know when she was born or how old she was, I don’t even know if she was really a girl I just loved her

Man hey be maamaan goftaam lets set her free, but maamaan goft she would only die faster if we did that

Now all I can think of is whether she would have still been alive if we had set her free

She was my favorite, na talaaee bood na ghermez, she was pale white. She looked so calm and she moved so elegantly as if she was dancing

Baale she was the last of our four haft-seen fishes… az in se dome khoshgelaa, domesham keheili derazo khoshgel bood…

Manam midoonam ke hamamoon ye roozi mimirim...

but I wonder if she were still alive if we had set her free... tooye howze park…

Hi Zoha!

Bah Bah Zoha Khanoom! Finally! Glad to see you!

You have a very beautiful name well umm my name I mean the name my mom and dad gave me is Neda... Neda means a voice or a sound that reminds you of something...

But I have a question for you:

If you could choose your name yourself what would that name be?

zoha:have you ever thought about the meaning of your names?
zoha means=the bright sun
i am happy that my parentce has put such a nice name on me.
if you also know the meaning of your name, let the others know about it!!move on lazy !!

Hello,i am zoha . i am busy with my final exams

horton

hrton;is a elephant. he swim white his frind .and the bird gett his frind.hortonwas angiry. and his friend is craying.the elephantgett the bird .andhorton kit it.his frind .his friendsaid;tanks horton .

dastan ; i going to the buy family.and i lost.icraying. the man said ;wath happen girl and .the man gei said ilost tt me to my family .and isaid tanks .my mom is happy mydad to is this good

boshra

miniature said...
mersi dear Boshra!
It's good to see you again!
What about Horton what did you do with him!?
What made you start your story? I'd really like to know!

post your comments

haji said...
besmehi taala salam you should have told your community about your birthdate.happy birthday, born to be a teacher. from our family

miniature said...
Thanks alot Haji and Family!

weeping willow said...
Sorry for the delay to come to your birthday party! Happy birthday! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Miniature! Happy teacher's day! Happy born to be a teacher. not to brag, I have the best ( it is the worst word, so let me change it to the most lovely, oh No, it's even worse, what do you think about the most caring, the most divine, the most heavenly, the most/best of what I can imagine, not even perceive, by my little weak mind everything,) teacher of the whole universe from Azal and apparently to abad, EVER.She is Mrs. Ghahremani I'm so sorry for all the gifts of the world as none deserves her even if they may deserve my limited feeling to her.I am desolate if I didn't get anything for you,I'm all yours truly sencerely and honestly though, Sorry again for such a futile gift, Happy your day to you and your beteachered husband, weeping willow, The Grateful

ebnossabil said...
salamhappy bithday! another ordibeheshti in our community, good news! so, in this way i think the real teachers' day is rooze ghiamat! god bless us all!

miniature said...
Thanks everyone! "i think the real teachers' day is rooze ghiamat! god bless us all!" wow this really gives me the shivers!

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miniature said...
Salam Mahya and welcome to Hamrahaane Noor! I am really happy to see you here. I have a question to ask you: why did you choose "dragon" as your title?

miniature said...
Salam Boshra! It's really good to see you girls finally writing on Binalood! Man ke dige dasht yavash yavash hoselam sar miraft che khoob shod ke oomadin! can you tell us more about the things you want to write about and why? Thanks alot!

post your comments

ebnossabil said...
salami like this and that keeping in shape very much and i think writing is a great help for keeping the shape and sometime maybe changing the shape cause i can NOT live with my hands shut

miniature said...
Yeah... you know I remember reading somewhere around here and at the Moaasese someone (I think it was Loud I am not sure) said the activity which lies in writing could be compared with ping-pong... so fast and so full of motion, it's amazing.

ebnossabil said...
salam for me this i do always comes with we do or you do or i did or i will do or-like ahmadreza- i do not door.....but i like reasoning and if you ask me why there are very few movies which i have watched them from start to close i would say i usually could not avoid making my own versions so when the authors -not moallefs- [as munir was saying author comes from authority but talif comes from olfat, you see the huge difference?] do not leave space for you to be then i have to CREATE my own way like what ahmadreza was doing in ensha classes or weeping willow in his writing healings... sorry too tall!

miniature said...
Salam bar Ebnossabil! It's good to see you again. Wow... you know... I had never really looked at it that way but I guess you are right... there are many things that we have to learn "not to do" like we shouldn't take things for granted we should enable ourselves to see through formalities and be able to tell when we are being fed into believing lies... thanks for the enlightening comment the authority vs. Olfat part was really interesting as well. p.s. you didn't tell us if there is anything you keep on doing all the time without even knowing why? -Peace

we went to a jajrood last week. we went to it bus . we seet on the chair and read abook . often has aglass bicaese its too hat. and i eat lunch ,play,and the bus comes .i and the passegers, is taird bus stop i go home. my kasin is in my home i m sad bicaese itis very very yery,vooroojac boshra.

COMING SOON!

Salam to all,
Soon you will, INSHALLAH, receive a serial story written by a famous but humble author based on a true story. It's not yet been named and accomplished by the author though. Precisely the author is seeking for your company, help and comments during the contribution of it's parts. In addition, you are indeed needed to give a warm hand to the author for directing the story. Actually I have introduced you to the author as a special and unique community of writers in Iran. I will also play the the bridging role of a friend between you and the author in an attempt to help the whole community exchange and share their ideas and stories.
Sincerely yours,
Willow

Agge Goftin!

Ahaaay dokhtaaara! Kojain!?!

Agge goftin ina Chiyan?

Agge goftin ina kojaan?

Agge goftin ina gharaare chi beshan?

Agge goftin akse inaro baraye chi gozashtam injaa?

Hameye inaro age goftin then I will tell you my own version of the story! Bodoin

montazeramaaa!

Born to be a teacher!

You said something the other day when I was 5 years old.

You didn’t think it was special, no one did.

It was just a couple of words anyway… simple, easy, just a couple of words.

But you didn’t realize words live forever.

Your words changed me, made me make some weird special decisions here and there.

You just said a word it’s only a word… but they were YOUR words… It was YOU who made a change…

You could be anyone, a mother, a brother, a sister, a father, a friend, a person crossing the street, baghghale sare kooche, the barber who cuts my hair, you could be older or younger than me… no matter who you are I announce you a TEACHER!!!! You’ve made me change whether good or bad I’ve learned something from you and you’ve brought about a change.

Pas ey kasi ke Mollemi va fekr mikoni ke Mollem nisti… va ey kasi ke Moallem hastiyo khodeto daste kam migiri… va ey kasi ke faghat kheili sade Moallemi… bedoon ke kheili adame bahaal va bozorgi hasti…!

ROOZET MOBARAAAK!

(And happy birthday to me, happy birthday to me, Happy birthday to Miniature, happy birthday to me!!!! Yes I was born on 12e Ordibehest!!! Yes I was born on teacher’s day!!! WOW... Born to be a... na hichi, che rabti dare akhe?!!!!)

bahar

I am boshra.

my family name is tahaee.

I am in grade 4.

I am ten years old.

I live in Tehran.

dragon

my name is mahya.
my brother's name is mohammad.

Why, Why, Why?

It has been quite a while now I’ve been thinking

Why, why, why?

Why am I so keen on watching movies? What is gonna happen in the end if I finish watching all the good movies in the world? So I decided to interview myself to find out… yes ba khodam mosahebe kardam ta baalke befahmam chera enghadr movie doost daraam bebinam!

Miniature: Hmm let’s start from here, why am I watching movies? Well to get a better sense of umm no… To uhhh enhance my vocabulary; mikhaam daamaneye loghaatam gostardehtar beshe maybe

Interviewer: Maybe huh? And then what? What will happen if you enhance your vocabulary? Oomadimo shod… khob baadesh chi?

Miniature: Well I guess I can communicate better I have a wider choice of words to choose from when I want to express myself and therefore my ideas wont die anymore just coz I don’t know how to bring them into words,bale behtar mitoonam ertebaat bargharaar konam…

Interviewer: You got a lot of alternate ways to enhance your vocabulary you know but okay, ideas… ideas are a good start now work it up

Miniature: Well?

Interviewer: Well we want to hear more

Miniature: About movies?

Interviewer:Yeah you can say that

Miniature: Uhh yeah uhhh I mean watching movies is it really just about words, and vocabulary and words? That would be stupid! No there is gotta be something more… just where is it? Uhhh… Well movies I guess uhhh inspire me they uhh they have got lessons, of course some of them. Some of them are twisted and pichideh, I learn not to see the surface anymore I learn to see through things and dive in. And we got good movies and bad just like anything else hamechiz khoob o bad dare I think I need to see the bad and cheap movies as well coz uhhh well how can you tell what’s good if you don’t know what bad is… Yeah… adam bayad ye zarre az har chizio tajrobe kone maybe… so… they inspire me they give me a wider image I realize that there are endless ways of looking and there are way more than only 3 or 4 dimensions to life… wow! I’ve learned some wonderful poems and quotes through movies some of them you can even live by and sometimes I write reviews…Sometimes I just need a rush of adrenaline and hayajan and excitement and a thriller or a horror movie would give me it! How’s that for a start? I know I gotta find more reasons, I’ll make sure to think more about it...

Yeah so that's me. Now it’s your turn to tell me my friends at Hamrahane Noor Team, Is there anything in your life that you keep on doing over and over again maybe even every day and you are very keen on it but you never really have realized why you do it? Kari hast ke az vaghti yadetoon miyad hamishe anjaamesh midadid va kheili ham behesh alaaaghe darid amma dar asl aslan nemidoonid chera oon karo mikonid? Tajrobaatoono ba ma dar miyoon bezarid. Think about it and share your version with us.

Thanks,

-Miniature

Here We go

So I guess this is finally it.

A one year tour of writing; how better can life get!

To introduce myself I uhh… I’ll start with my fingers, I’ve got ten of them, 5 on each hand, different shapes and different sizes. They do have a lot in common but believe me each of them is a totally exclusive world. They cooperate with each other, work together shoulder to shoulder (of course fingers have shoulders! Don’t tell me you didn’t notice) and for the time being they are all set. They are really totally excited; they’ve been keeping in shape just to start typing and communicating.

Oh and I have got a brain somewhere too. I think my brain is like the one in charge: gives me reminders, puts me to work, gives me recesses, and she is so full of ideas just waiting to burst out.

So I guess now you can figure out why this place is such a great blessing!

WARNING! Make sure to contribute frequently

Cheers, Miniature

يا سلام

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم انا اعطيناك الكوثر فصل لربك وانحر ان شانئك هوالابتر